I hereby declare thursdays: "education is the poop day"... here's my homework for school, can yoooouuuuu figure it out?
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fact-checking problem: what color is your airplane?
a fact checker was assigned the check a story on a canadian airline to appear in the business section of macleans. a passage that caused trouble is in bold; the entire lead paragraph is provided for context.
"this week more than a thousand cp air employees will gather in a massive hangar at vancouver international airport. there, they will watch the unveiling of the first dc-10 painted in the company's new colors. the bold orange and red scheme conceived in the 1960s is giving way to a more sober pattern of red white and blue."
the following exchange took place while the fact checker was going over the story with the airline's public relations person:
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fact checker: "and the new color scheme on your planes in red, white and blue."
pr guy: "no, no, no. Everybody says that."
fc: "it's not red, white and blue?"
pr guy: "no."
fc: "then what color is it?"
pr: "sky blue and cloud white. those are the official colors."
fc: "the planes are blue and white?"
pr: "no. the colors are sky blue and cloud white."
fc: "and there's no red anywhere on the plane?"
pr: "well, there's a thin red stripe separating the blue half from the white half, running the length of the plane."
fc: "so the planes are red, white and blue."
pr: "you're not listening."
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what change, if any, should the fact checker make to the sentence in question?
Apr 15, 2004
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